I feel that our preliminary task was a mix of success and failure. On one hand, I think that the editing was done very well and has produced a piece the continuity of which is very good. However, I think this piece falls down on the narrative which isn't all that good. A more obvious narrative may be better for such a short clip, as there isn't the time to slowly reveal the plot.
Don't be too hard on yourselves! This is a very entertaining interpretation of the brief, I think its great. Just make sure the film opening is a lot better!
I feel that our preliminary task was a mix of success and failure. On one hand, I think that the editing was done very well and has produced a piece the continuity of which is very good. However, I think this piece falls down on the narrative which isn't all that good. A more obvious narrative may be better for such a short clip, as there isn't the time to slowly reveal the plot.
ReplyDeleteDon't be too hard on yourselves! This is a very entertaining interpretation of the brief, I think its great. Just make sure the film opening is a lot better!
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